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The dangers of revising history

I wrote this in about ten minutes and made one edit pass for about another ten.

The day angels criedTwo hundred ninety eight tearsFor every falling star

This blew me away. With my background though, it's no wonder.

Just rambling

I ain't fer it, I'm again' it.

I should leave right now Got just enough gas to go And money for the bridge but I can't leave you like that Even though I want to You've bee..

Just go with it

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I'm opening up, sorry.