>erotica Only< Forum New Story Needs Reviews...

I just finished this story and I am in need of reviews. This is the longest short story I have written to date and is my first attempt at 10,000 words.I am looking at entering this into a contest but wanted to get a little bit of feedback on it first to see if there is anything I might be able to fine tune or tweek. If you have a few minutes please read and review my story Quenching Desires. Any readers that review my story will receive a return review from me for your help. 
Quenching Desires tells of a woman and her dream sexual encounter. :)

Happy Reading all!