1st time Romance Novels : Forum : Please review

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Please review

7 Years Ago

I would really love to get feedback on my novel (or at least the very early stages of my novel) "Love at First Fight". I'm looking for constructive criticism and also some help to get out of my writer's block. The things I'm looking for are:
1. What should the big secret keeping Michelle under the man's control be? (I have an idea I think I want to go with, but if I hear something better I might change it.)
2. I'm looking for a general plot line in Dylan's life. I already know most of what will happen between Dylan and MIchelle, but I need ideas as to what's going on in his life that doesn't have to do with her. 
Thanks in advance!