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Hi everyone! I started a song in my head....havent even written it down on paper or on computer yet....until now....a little unsure of where to go next, so I thought Id post it on here and you guys could help me out a little?? thanks! here is all I have so far:

A heart full of regret
will kill you quicker than a bullet to the brain
a single teardrop cried from loneliness
is more devestating than any amount of flesh induced pain......

Thats all I have...kinda dramatic and corny, but hey, its what came to me.... ::smile::

seeing as how this was posted two years ago, do you have more lyrics to this song yet?