DARK REALM Forum help on a novel...

so i started a book a while back then all my pc's crashed. i just got a new laptop and been wondering if i should finish the book or not. its very raw, filled with grammatical errors, spelling horrors and so on. its a crime/noir/horror story. ill upload it to the group so you guys can tear it apart but i just cant really decide on my own to abandon ship, start completely over or see it through. its called descent pt1. i will warn you all there isnt any chapters its 50 pages with no breaks, just raw thinking processes. id appreciate all help, input, advice ect. wether you read it or not. thanks guys! :)

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