Fantasy Writers Club Forum chapters from my novel

Hello fantasy people! I'm new to the site and have just posted several chapters from my fantasy novel, The Gods of Midian: A Tale of Two Kings.    I am a music teacher by trade, and this is my first attempt at long form fiction.  If any of you masters have some time, I'd very much enjoy some feedback.   I will be checking your stuff out as well.   Nice to be part of the group!   -J.

The same here I wrote my first book three yrs ago and still have alot of great ideas. I too like to play music, draw, and write and I pick writing fantasy because it turns out that it was more simple than picking a guitar. Yes I will reveiw your work in returns to reveiwing my work look foward to hearing from you.