Fiction Writers Forum Book Review

I am in the process of writing my first book. It's been a little while since I have wrote on this, but I have the first five chapters up. Any chapters that you can review would be greatly appreciated. I will review something of yours in return. Thank you so much.

No problem! I'm new to the site too so would love to start reviewing other people's work. I have posted my first chapter too so take a look.

I'll get a review of the chapters I read up by this weekend :)
Chris