I'm Under 18 Years Old, I'm A Writer, And I'm Proud. Forum Feedback for Novel wanted!

Hello everyone. I am new to this site and am writing a novel called the Empire.
I would really love some feedback on what I have uploaded so far.

Is more action needed? More dialogue? Shorter sentences? More explanation? More description? More development into characters? Does the blurb and prologue make sense? Do they make you want to read the book?

Thanks.