I'm Under 18 Years Old, I'm A Writer, And I'm Proud. Forum Review for review!

Hello everyone! I'm beginning a new story about a complex character and known myth in Mexico named La Catrina. I'm looking for people who will help me better my writing by editing or giving suggestions for my story. In return, I'll do the same! You can click HERE to be redirected to my story. I must warn you it's a little graphic at times!