I'm Under 18 Years Old, I'm A Writer, And I'm Proud. Forum Need feed backs.

I am surely writing a novel and I would like people to help me edit it and review it as much possible. I am under eighteen and would publish my book with help, of course. So, please check out "Arcadia: The Tale of the Tower" and give off your feed backs. It is the first book in the "Arcadia" series. Please reply. Thank you. :)