I'm Under 18 Years Old, I'm A Writer, And I'm Proud. Forum Hello, i am pretty new here :D

I am dying for some reviews on my poems because I want to improve myself and my writing skills and I also want to share my thoughts trough my poems. So if you have some spare time, please review my poems :)

Can you review my story?

yup sure ... i have read them and they are great you write beautifully..................can you help review mine