Lyrical Lounge Forum I don't ask much.....

Aight ya'll....I need your help. My lil brother is starting to write and I'm trying to make him feel proud enough to carry this s**t forward.

If you guys could PLEASE just stop by and give him a comment on his first written poem ever.

He is only 12 and he wrote this piece in about 15 minutes....so please keep that in mind.

Much love!