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Looking for feedback

9 Years Ago


I wrote part 1 to a story ive had on my mind and would like some feedback. I want to keep it going but im not sure how i did. Its my first time writing a story and i feel its boring. Any feedback is appreciated.

Thanks,
       SirHedgehog

Re: Looking for feedback

8 Years Ago


Originally posted by SirHedgehog
I wrote part 1 to a story ive had on my mind and would like some feedback. I want to keep it going but im not sure how i did. Its my first time writing a story and i feel its boring. Any feedback is appreciated.

Thanks,
       SirHedgehog

I'd check it out! If you can please read mine as well?