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True love endures


True love endures when passion dies.
This should not come as a surprise,
it is a lesson all must learn
at their own pace each in their turn.
True love endures.

In time we learn to recognise
the honest truth from the half lies
and find the love for which we yearn.
True love endures.

There is no room for compromise
.The truth is written in the eyes.
What you receive is what you earn
After the flames of passion burn
away the half truths and the lies.
True love endures.

7-Jul-07
Rondeau

French form
Fifteen lines
a quintet a quatrain and a sestet.

Rhyming pattern
Ra 1st line contains refrain
A
B
B
a.

a
a
b
R. refrain

a
a
b
b
a
R refrain

Poetic piers

I am so dumb.. i dont know what you mean by 'refrain'.. a line break?

Refrain a repeated word or phrase M 'lovely we all have to learn and the best way is to ask questions
True love endures is the refrain ivor