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BRAND NEW ME...(SPOKEN WORD)BY: IVORY16 Years AgoBrand New Me...(Classymami) (Spoken word) Have you notice the change in me? Smaller waist, slim face; Looks good with my smile; I havent looked this good in a long while. And all it took, Was for my world to get shook. Lost my love, but gain myself. Pain that I have never felt, but better days to come; Cuz when you look at me, you will know you lost a great one. I wont stop here, I have more to do. And I will show you, I will make myself even better. You remember what I was like before? Cute, sweet, never insecure; I found comfort in your love back then, You made me feel more beautiful then I ever imagined. Now it seems, I not lustful enough for you. But in reality you couldnt keep up with me, Sex was a chore for you, something you felt you had to do. I was satisfied with what you gave, But I yearned for more. You never gave your all. Instead, you were on call. Pleasing another. You gave her what I thought was mine Left me behind; I sit back a think of how you hurt me And it gets easier with time. To welcome another guy, Willing to receive all I have left to give; I lost myself in you, but I still have a life to live. Youve moved on. Loving another but she wont last long. If you think youll be satisfied, youre wrong. Can she do what I do, hold you like I use to. Pleasure you until you moan and smile the way I use to make you? I dont think so, but still you need to venture off. Our love is stranded, lost. While your out playing foolish games, Ill be here lighting my flame. With my seductive smile and slim waist, I will show you I always had what it takes. Ill have no problem finding a replacement. A reality you will be faced with. Moving forward wont be hard for me. You think you took everything away, But I still have my inner beauty. I always knew how to get attention, And did I forget to mention, Im a natural flirt. I dont have to work too hard, Just use my girlish charm and watch as they swarm The men will follow, I dont have a doubt. Soon Ill have a list of men giving me shout outs But Im not looking for love, Dont believe in it anymore. Because of you, Ive closed that door. Youre not missing me; Or what we called home. So why should I suffer alone? Your new woman makes you feel good today, But remember, I made you better in so many ways. I wasted too much time on you. And even though it hurt, Im grateful we are through. So take a good look at me. Classy, independent and free; You knocked me down, but Im rising up slowly. You will realize one day that leaving me was a mistake. But it was the chance you were willing to take. I have no more time to waste. With my sexy new look, charm and spice. I know when it comes down to it, You will hate to admit it, But this classymami will be alright ; ) |
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[no subject]16 Years AgoI LIKE THIS! lol you should submit it in the contest. To me it's relatable, and it kind of hits an emotional chord...
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[no subject]16 Years Agothank you. i appreciate you taking the time to read my piece. I would like to submit it, but i don't know how to do the voice recording. lol i never recorded myself reading my work before.
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[no subject]16 Years Ago*poetry playlist pioneers* check the group out it explains how to do it! lol. You should because when you hear the recording, it gives you an even better idea about what the writer was feeling, and the emotion etc. |
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[no subject]16 Years Agothanks for the info..lol i appreciate it and i think i will try it : )
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