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Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


Hey do you guys want to help write this? Because you and possibly your descendants characters will be coming into it...

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


YES THAT WOULD BE AWESOME

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


Sweet. Um... help me write the next chapter...
Start of it:

The train into Seattle is nearly empty, at least to the couple of others riding it. To me, it is full of the characters accompanying me. For some reason, they won't disappear. We ride in awkward silence for hours, after the harrowing plane flight from New York to Oregon. Not sure why we didn't just fly straight to Seattle, I think.
"Because the SeaTac airport is still closed after I almost destroyed it," the masked man says almost sheepishly. Ah, yes. The first time I unleashed creativity.
"Wait, seriously?" The eagle-winged boy seems impressed. "Wish I could've seen that."
"Aren't you always following me around anyway?" The man teases.
"I wasn't that time, you're the only one who got through," the boy replies sulkily.
"Shh," I hiss, making sure the other train riders don't hear me.
Minutes later, we pull into the station. I hurry off first, and my characters follow me. We nearly race down the street to the address my first friend gave me. I ring the doorbell.

Then POV SWITCH to your POV I guess.

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


OK
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Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


=) I'm working on Dl's DCT chapter too right now

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7 Years Ago


I hop out of my chair, where I was typing on my chromebook, and open the door of my apartment.
Standing there, is one of my best- and strangest- friends, uh what's her name

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


Let's just not use names =) it makes it more mysterious.

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


ok
Standing there is one of my best- and strangest- friends.
"Hello!" I say. "I haven't seen you in forever! Come in!"

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7 Years Ago


"Hi," she replies. "Um, can I come in?"

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


reread what i wrote

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


change that last talking part to "Um, can I talk to you about something?"

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7 Years Ago


"Sure, anything." We go inside, and sit down in my tiny living room. "What do you want to talk about?" Her eyes dart around the room, as if seeing things that I can't.

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"Them." She points. I turn to see... people? Not just any people, but the characters she controls in one of our most in-depth stories.

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I jump up, grabbing for the pistol I keep in the side table by one of the tiny couches. I face them, one of them the most villainous man I know (I mean, I helped shape him), and some of the other most dangerous people I know, besides the characters that I control.
"Dude," I say, voice shaky. "Please tell me that you have illusion powers."

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


A girl with silver wings, who looks like my friend but cooler, answers. "That's more his thing," she says, nudging the spiky-haired man.
"Can't deny that. But this isn't an illusion," he says.
"I'd put that down if I were you," the gray-haired man warns.

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


(spiky hair is dl, right?)
"I'm not stupid," I snarl. "I know who you are, and just how dangerous you are. Only an idiot wouldn't protect themselves around you guys."

Re: Breaking the Line

7 Years Ago


Yep that's dl

"We're not here to cause trouble," a glowing boy with eagle wings says as he steps forwards, hands up as if in surrender. "We're actually... hoping you can help us."

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I lower the pistol a little. "How would I be able to help you?"

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7 Years Ago


"They've been plaguing me since they were written," my friend replies. "I was hoping you and our other friend... that together, the three of us could reverse whatever this is."

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7 Years Ago


"How?" I reply. "Like, write them out of existence? I don't think that they- or my characters, for that matter- would like that very much..." I stare at the gray haired man, never letting my gaze wander. I marvel at seeing our words become flesh, looking exactly as I expected, but totally different at the same time.

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