The Empty Cupboard Writing Club... (Succinct Simplicity) Forum My Short, short story.

Ended? It never started. He didn't ask and she didn't say.

That's a good one.

Here's mine:

"Who is there?"
...

What about;

Underneath the car and in the verge were parts of the seatbelt unconnected to the clip.

I like that one better than the first.

2nd try:
The phone began to ring. The man picked up the gun. The phone was still ringing.

Good one.

3rd try.

Born hairless without teeth, died toothless without hair.

how about:

His hair grew longer as time stood still, but beneath his fingernails lay questions unanswered.

OHH! I HAVE YOU ALL BEAT!!!:


It.


::suprised::

It what?

Already I want to know more. He he.

I have been missing out by not looking here properly.
How about..

"Nettle soup is a possibility."
The concensus was it would have to do until the next stranger arrived.