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My latest write up 'Those Sundays in Winter' (Click on this link  to get to the poem) was my first attempt to rhyme. I believe when I am trying to introduce a rhyme scheme in my poem, it tends to restrict my thoughts and I am not able to use my full capacity. That's why my poems don't have any rhyme scheme. However, I made an exception this time. Though, in the first draft, there was not any rhyme scheme and I introduced a rhyme scheme later. It was a lot of work. I am still unsure that it is not working or not. Please do let me know. Any suggestion or correction for the contents of the poem is also welcome.