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review my poem please
review my poem please14 Years AgoLOVE
Love is to savor,
Love is to share,
Love is to conquor,
Love is to care.
Listen to your heart,
Do so without fear,
We are destined to love,
All those we hold dear.
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Re: review my poem please12 Years AgoYour poem is so true and has such meaning, and yet it was all said in such a short poem very good......
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Re: review my poem please11 Years AgoStrong simple phrases. I think it could be even more powerful in breaking them into shorter lines.
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Re: review my poem please10 Years AgoThis is a short poem, but a nicely well written one as well. I really enjoyed reading it! Good job! :)
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