The Reviewer's Community Forum Review For My Book in Progress..

I'd love to get some feedback on my work-in-progress. Be as brutally honest as you like.
I'm OCD about returning the favour, so you can be sure I'll read your work in return. :)

I reviewed chapters 4&5 for you.  I am hoping I will be able to read the others later on today, after I get some of my other work done!