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10,000 word story in need of a reveiw!

4 Years Ago

I am new here, and to writing. I have this story I have been working on, and I need some feedback from others. Even if it is negative. I would just really like to know what you think about it so far, and weather I should continue with this or if I should scrap it and start new! Anything helps. 

And thank you in advance!