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Hey! So I just joined this community, and my first post, a poem called 'Bliss', is up! I'm not really sure of my prowess as a poet, and I definitely think I'm lacking in many areas, but I'm not sure what exactly I'm doing wrong. Please leave your thoughts on it and tell me where I should improve, so that I can continue to grow as a writer! Thanks! -Koko