Want Some Reviews? Forum A Faire to Remember

Hi, I'm new here. I've been dabbling with creative writing since I was ten years old. I'm considerably older than ten now. While most of my previous writing has been in novella/novel form, I've posted my first short story. I think I'm a decent storyteller, but I'd like to hear what other people think. The story is "A Faire to Remember". Thanks for your consideration.