Women Of The Dark Side Forum Horror writing

Yes, This is the same story i have posted in the writer cafe. But its very important to me it was one of the hardest parts of the novel, 'Death of a Vampire God.' That I have written with the other Author. This is the chapter that I wrote for the novel this was something at first that was lost and I had go back and add it to the novel later. But the beginning was the hardest scene I had to write. Its hard to write about something that is so small and delicate as a leaf that falls to the ground in the Fall season, and get it right the first time.

Maybe you can name something much, more delicate than that?

Well, I hope you enjoyed the part of the novel, because everyone else has to buy the book, so I think... hehe!
Jean Elizabeth

Oh goody!! Thanks for sharing this with us.

Vampires...Yum. Once I read it (this will be my leisure read for the night :D, I figure, if you're already publishing, then any critiqueing would be fairly irrelevant? So...) I'll let you know what I think. I'm actually working on a new take on Vamps myself.

Looking forward to it,
Dana
aka Karma

something more delicate... something more delicate....

one of the most delicate things i've written is when i want the reader to hear- if literally great, if almost that's good too- the sound of a person's mind *cracking*. Not a crunchy crack, when you break a chip or crack apart, but the kind of crack you hear when you break an old fashioned wooden pencil in two.

But you don't want to have to come right out and say "His mind snapped."

you just show it, letting the reader realize when that moment occured and that there is no going back.

it's so hard to be subtle.. ::drool::