WritersCafe Community Forum New member looking to recieve ..

Hello, I just joined this website today and have posted a message I composed for my significant other. I write similar, lengthy "poems" (which can be considered as diatribes) and would like to get responses regarding word usage, flow, and other tenants of good writing composition. I'll link the post here for anyone interested. Thank you and much appreciated.

Yikes, didn't know the link wouldn't go through. Sorry about that.

No bigge my dude lol