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Attempt at a limerick
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Will it stay?
The blanket interwoven with
Experiences, transgressions,
Growth
A string unravels and
The blanket changes form
But will it sta..
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Up in the air,
Uncertainty ignites the wick-
Of anticipation;
The slow burn of trial
And error
Come on, little one
What are you waiting for?
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Velvet blue, ink black, sheer purple
Layer the sky.
Wind crashes against trees,
flows through him; marks his breath
The layers dissolve into
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Physical distance is changing
familiar into foreign
my memory lost its foundation
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As time stretches
The hourglass fills
Then overflows
You see, days melt into
one another,
Indistinguishable
Weeks, months, years follow
Th..
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I've finally caught onI am not your TV,your internet,nor your radio.Not here for your entertainment.My circumstances aren't for rebuilding your self c..
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I want to stay like this
On the surface of easy banter
Delving deeper
Unravels uneasiness
Illuminates cemented change
Directs our dissolving..
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My partner and I, work well
I observe
He processes
But, when a person closed off
I only see what he wants
My partner only thinks what he allow..
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An important rule of writing is using past and present tense
Showing difference between past and present events
Also, applicable in conversation
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