I Wanna Throw "I Love You"'s In Her Face

I Wanna Throw "I Love You"'s In Her Face

A Poem by sivan

I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face, like
baby move in with me cause' 
my closet has too much space for just one set of clothes.
And if it were up to me that is how it would be,
her and me, happy
ever after,
but she ain't no dummy model she
has a mind of her own
so I hold my love in my hand a little longer.

I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face, like
baby it's gotta be just me cause'
there is no one else I can see myself with.
Because the sun reminds me of the blonde of her dreads
so I wake up to her each morning,
and the moon, the moon reminds me of the shine in her smile
so she looks upon me from the night sky and cradles me in slumber.
But that is just part of a beautiful reminder
so I hold my love in my hand a little longer.

I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face, like
baby, " Will you marry me?" cause'
from the moment we first kissed I imagined saying
I DO.
And if it were up to me it would be her and me and
our first baby but
I'm too young and
She's not ready,
so I hold my love in my hand a little longer.

I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face, but
I'm afraid she'll turn her head away.

© 2013 sivan


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I want to throw I love you's in yo face, because this is amazing. It touches me so deeply because me and my love are 17 years apart and I swear for the longest time my hand was the hand he was holding. Seriously, three years later and now I'm throwing the Love You's-- like baby, I am moving in, your closet is too big , I need to put my stuff there! lol. I am in love with this poem I have to share it with him. Amazing job love. AMAZING!

Posted 10 Years Ago


sivan

10 Years Ago

thanks you made me smile for the morning..glad it affected you so
"I wake up to her each morning,

and the moon, the moon reminds me of the shine in her smile

so she looks upon me from the night sky and cradles me in slumber.

But that is just part of a beautiful reminder"
A splendid read and write...Bravo...:)

so I hold my love in my hand a little longer.




I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face,

Posted 10 Years Ago


sivan

10 Years Ago

Thanks!! i too love the line : I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
wow i can imagine what you are feeling! so sad but yet so in love! this is great! wonderful job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


writingurl14

10 Years Ago

yup... :) well i hope it works out
sivan

10 Years Ago

so do i but it has been a long and rough 3 year road so the tyres are a bit worn out metaphorically .. read more
writingurl14

10 Years Ago

yea... know how you feel...

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sivan
sivan

Durban, South Africa



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I am a student of computer engineering... very technical yes but i like to get lost in the creativity of poetry and writing. Im an out and proud lesbian and if anyone doesn't like that well then that .. more..

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