Eye Contact Essentials

Eye Contact Essentials

A Poem by sivan

Eyes penetrating from a distance-

You aren’t even trying.

I guess discretion is not your thing.

Overrated, outdated, dripping fantasies,

Crawling across the room and up into my thoughts-

You know he won’t notice.

 

Diabolically speaking

Internally breaking the surface with your composure.

Standing there and I am not blind!

Suffocating me

In your trance inducing performance-

You know he’s unaware.

 

Subconsciously channeling

Waves of curiosity.

Freely exposed to vulnerability

Waiting for my reaction,

Teasing you with your own attraction-

You know he doesn’t care.

 

Secrets between us

Filling the air he is breathing,

Coursing through his veins like an unknown virus

Attacking the immune system.

Unattractive, deceitful indecencies-

He doesn’t realize

He lost you to my stare.

© 2011 sivan


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the nuances of mystery and allusions to seductive skin balanced with realistic concrete thoughts works superbly to relate the emotional core coiling through the poetic~ much enjoyed reading this composition~

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. brilliant ! ... this is an amazing anatomy of a moment ... utterly skillful ... and sensitive ... narrated in the perfect tone ... biting and sharp ... a great read ... that last line is particularly amazing ...

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sivan
sivan

Durban, South Africa



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I am a student of computer engineering... very technical yes but i like to get lost in the creativity of poetry and writing. Im an out and proud lesbian and if anyone doesn't like that well then that .. more..

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