Liquid Emotion

Liquid Emotion

A Poem by sivan

Dull thoughts

drip through

from behind closed eyes.

To stop thinking

would buy me

a little time.

To stop breathing

would pause

this state of mind.

To start healing

would restore my pride.

 

 

© 2011 sivan


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Short and sweet. I connected to it well. Simple, but touching.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and sweet. I connected to it well. Simple, but touching.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good solid poem. I very much enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow very deep . I love the emotion here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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. ah, well ... you said it ... and brilliantly at that ... this is an extremely poignant and poetic piece of writing ... i live in those "dull thoughts" ... and have been trying to escape them since a really long time now ... now i just accept them ... and wait for "my pride to be restored" ... patiently ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


So easy to manifest in this reader's mind. Your words are embedded in my imagination. Though I am perhaps a bit enthused it never ceases to heighten the experience.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 9, 2011
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sivan
sivan

Durban, South Africa



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I am a student of computer engineering... very technical yes but i like to get lost in the creativity of poetry and writing. Im an out and proud lesbian and if anyone doesn't like that well then that .. more..

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