Unpredictable Circumstances Have Arisen

Take a moment to visualize beauty,

Sometimes it doesn’t come from the expected.

If you always judge at a first glance

You’ll lose the meaning of it all.

Allow me to show you the rise and the fall-

It’s not that bad.

Offer yourself willingly and I will do the same

Second chances are all we have after losing this game.

Don’t rush the selection process based on any man made formula

Love is not a proven equation.

Ideal pulleys don’t exist in reality

In relation to you I act spontaneously

Combusting aimlessly and not on cue;

I never could have predicted what I feel for you.

Reviews

[Emily B]

these are truly beautiful words

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

such a smooth and humanE poetic created with a loving brush~ beautiful writing

[K.C. Zbryk]

The way that you convey such a powerful message in such a brief piece is amazing. I believe that this is the best piece of poetry that i have come across this evining.
I though the line, "In relation to you I act spontaneously
Combusting aimlessly and not on cue;" was poetic genius

[EMMIE]

If you always judge at a first glance

You’ll lose the meaning of it all.

AIN'T THAT THE DAMN TRUTH! LOVE THOSE LINES. THIS POEM IS SO REAL AND TRUE. THIS IS A DOPE WRITE!!!

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. a beautifully balanced piece of writing ...
. and of course ravishing poetry ...

[Stef Outsiders]

everything about life is unpredictable even love... beautifully said though.. and crafted smoothly too... well done.

[Vincent]

Beautiful write against the prejudices and normativity... oh and love of course. Well done

[J Todd Underhill]

Unpredictable indeed love is funny that way, takes you, shakes you and makes you its slave. It's a human condition that we try at times to avoid but still it controls us.