Take me kill us

Take me kill us

A Poem by Luke
"

its all twisted love two love ones trying to kill each other if you look hard i tried to make the poem shape like a rose in a vase on a night stand tell me if you see it enjoy!

"
take me here
take me there
take me anywhere
throw me in a casket
with a black basket
full of roses 
while people make awkward poses 
 and others are weeping 
while they look at me sleeping 
sleeping forever
oh i used to be so clever 
but look at me now 
not so clever now 
i'm dead in a bed
i should have fled 
but i so thought 
that if i fought 
i could take you 
and make you something you're not 
but you chose to murder me 
and i do understand why 
i thought i could fly 
high in the sky 
and shoot you down
and watch you drown 
in your own blood 
but you murdered me 
then you dragged me through the door`
you took me here you took me there
you took me everywhere 
but now i'm in a casket 
with a black basket 
people wail
now you flail 
your heart begins to fail
there's something gnashing at your skin 
there's something bashing on your head 
remember me sweetheart 
I've come back 
back to murder you 
do you like the roses
in the black basket 
i made them especially for you
i love you sweetheart 

© 2012 Luke


Author's Note

Luke
please no hateful reviews i ask only for constructive criticism i hope you enjoy thank you for reading

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

80 Views
Added on February 18, 2012
Last Updated on February 18, 2012

Author

Luke
Luke

Hurley, MS



About
nicest guy in the world i love musicand i love poetry more..

Writing