Taking A Nap

i was on the bus and i got bored, just took in my surroundings and put them into words.

Pulling my hood up,
close my eyes.
The rain has replaced the music as every drop takes my being to bind,
the wind bellowing like gentle sighs.
Every unconscious moment resting on my mind.
All the troubles go away as my head leans on the wall.
The dramatic conversations, the other noises, all in a separate place.
The scary change called Sleep, how deep will I fall?
I don't know the answer, i act all calm, but inside, my heart's set to pace.
My staggered breathing calming to a slow hum,

The seat dragging me in.

The black vision is swirling in front of me,

My whole body goes numb as the darkness consumes me.

Reviews

[~*_Michelle_*~]

I like how you describe this nap. It's not just merely nap, but an organisim that consumes the body, weather your willing or not. Bravo! Keep up the good work(:

[bookworm642]

I've never read a poem about a nap before but this was really good...you described it really well...I love the last line...good job!

[deadly healer]

oh. makes me wanna take a nap. sounds good. very deep poem for sleep.
i couldntv come up with this. nice job.