I Fall Apart When You Seek Me

I fall Apart When You Seek Me

You are the Total Eclipse on April 8^th, year 2024.

My eyes dilate.  The wave of the sun makes you mystic.

My guitar goes on.  My voice box screams because I’m lost.

Are we humanity? Let’s fight for what is Eulogy.

 

Astronomy is my feign.  Are you the sinner.

Zeus spoke to I.  Come to Greece and I’ll break year cap.

God said on to thee: You were never an angel, now you have wings.

 

I fall Apart When You Seek Me

 

 

You destroy me, Total Eclipse.

Stares, and I have no homage.

 

Father holds me close,

God.  My Father.

Author's Note

I ever so hope you enjoy my reader, the intricacies behind such,

Mishel R Reyes

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Your imagination and style of language is as near an adventure as can or could be; firstly thank you for sharing with this reviewer. As to your contrived tribute to the time of the recent eclipse, seems you see it as a fierce being ready to take the presence of those on Earth until 'they be gone'. Not sure if right or wrong, but certainly your words are uniquely laid.

'Astronomy is my feign. Are you the sinner.
Zeus spoke to I. Come to Greece and I’ll break year cap.
God said on to thee: You were never an angel, now you have wings.

I fall Apart When You Seek Me'

[1809 Black Plague December]

Dear Emma Joy, I'm so ever glad for every sentiment of wine you denote. Happy Holidays MJK,

[emmajoygreen]

Thank you very much for your thanks!!!

[1809 Black Plague December]

of course, Dear, will read your work throughout the day or twilight, :D

[emmajoygreen]

Many thanks