Choice

Everyday

you present to the outside your

Success

Accomplishments.

Everything

they need you to be

You Are.

 

It can't keep going this way you tell

yourself.

No, not because it becomes too much

Stress.

Pressure.

Not because you can't keep up

 

because what if

One Day

you can be everything they need but

You don’t.

Author's Note

Beginner writer, looking for any feedback on where to go from here, and any specific feedback about the poem.

Thank you.

Reviews

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I liked it. It's a less said message than it should be, not just not being able to provide something to someone, but what happens when you actively don't want to appease that person. It's a choice everyone makes eventually.

Well done.