Get out Of My Head

Get out Of My Head

A Poem by 1 Deep

Get out of my Head

When I'm alone
Not just physically but in thought
I am at peace
I am unworried
I have no anxieties
But when you are with me
Not just physically but in thought
My most tranquil days are spent in a raft
Floating in a sea of unsurety
My peace is shattered into pieces
I think of our time together
And wonder what it really means to you
I think of the sweet things you said to me
And wonder if they're really true
I'm anxious about the future
I wonder if we will step into it together
As one, holding hands
Or lose sight of one another
In the dense fog of life
I worry about what you will do with my heart
Now that I have given it to you
Perhaps foolishly
None of this would have happened
Had I kept my heart in my chest
Protected from the arrows of love by a vest
And stayed all alone
Not just physically,
But in thought.

© 2014 1 Deep


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Definitely struck a cord... Even in my happiest moments my thought turn to this, will my someone change? Also relatable to how I felt when I wrote "Friend". Thanks, I enjoy your writing style.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I know I haven't been on here in a longggg time, but I was always very fond of your writing and it's nice to hop on now, years later, and find it just as lovely. Nice to read your poetry again. I love this and identify with it completely, love is a scary thing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 Deep

5 Years Ago

lol I haven't been on in years, but I am back now. Thanks for the comment. Good to see you

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I'm a 24 year old male living in the Washington, DC area. I consider myself to be an amatuer poet and I wouldn't mind networking with other poets. I try to give honest reviews, which means I try to gi.. more..

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