haze

haze

A Poem by 1c3d57121ng5

drunken bouts of spin the bottle and seven minutes in heaven.

wake with a roaring headache, clothes strewn around, in a pile of vomit on somebody’s bed.

stagger to the shower and sink into a warm abyss.

my brain fails me.

i drown in the liquid quickly pooling at my feet.

seeing red.

© 2011 1c3d57121ng5


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Your a writer who gets right to the point in your pieces. Your writing, at least this piece, has a certain bluntness to it that makes me want to read more of your writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, sweet and to the point. Nothing more to say. It's awesome. I. Like. This.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

as i said before, it's really good. short, simple, to the point. no fluff, and no bullshit. keep writing, you have skills :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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