Read Between The Lines. Six Word Stories

Basically I'm just doing something simple. The title explains the whole thing.

      Her

                   If only he knew about me. 

Money 

                           Rich he was, but not happy.

Love

                  Don't blow me over for her.

      Gone 

                       She cried. He watched. She's gone. 

Why? 

                 Why did she think this way?

   Kids

                     Forever they were stuck in fairytales. 

Him 

                      I should have let you go.

Past

              It hurts to look back sometimes. 

                 Wanting 

              The one i wanted, slipped away. 

   Lost

   Lost, confused, the kids made her.

Author's Note

Any suggestions? Is it good or bad or okay?

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Very impressive. I, too, haven't seen a story told in this fashion before.
I like it.

[dopey]

Very cool piece! I haven't seen many create poems with this kind of format! I liked it!

[If Only You Knew My Secrets]

thank you! I'm glad you liked it(: