the opposite of me

the opposite of me

A Poem by destroyedhappines

You are the night to my day, when you say come, I want to stay,
You are the white to my black, when you go forward I go back,
You are the opposite of me.
You are the happy to my sad, you are the angry to my glad
You are the bottom to my top, when you say go, I say stop,
You are the opposite of me.

© 2012 destroyedhappines


Author's Note

destroyedhappines
Please comment on how i can improve my poetry. i am twelve so keep the suggestions appropriate to my age group. to see this poem and more from me go to unitedworldpoets.com. Thx!

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Added on February 16, 2012
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destroyedhappines
destroyedhappines

royal oak, MI



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I am a twelve year old from the east side of detroit. now dont think for a second my poems are inmature, because in almost all of my poems i eather relece my dark and depressed side or write about ang.. more..

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