What a wonderful world.

What a wonderful world.

A Poem by destroyedhappines

Life is but a rain shower, on a drought struck region. Cold water, life, on plants that mean life. Cold water on the dry throat of a child.

What a wonderful world

Life is but a cannon ball plunge into freezing cold water on a hot day. Cold water inviting you in and seducing you to stay.

What a wonderful world.

But life is also a flood, unperdictable and showing no mercy, the fury and might of unforgiving water.

What a wonderful world?

© 2012 destroyedhappines


Author's Note

destroyedhappines
Please comment on how i can improve my poetry. i am twelve so keep it age appropriate to my age group. Thx!

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destroyedhappines
destroyedhappines

royal oak, MI



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I am a twelve year old from the east side of detroit. now dont think for a second my poems are inmature, because in almost all of my poems i eather relece my dark and depressed side or write about ang.. more..

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