Wish upon a star

I don’t know who I am

I don’t know where I’m going

I’m lost inside my soul

I feel as if I’m already dead

Sometimes I wish upon a star

For life to change once and for all

I need, not a taste of lust

But everlasting love in my heart

 

Reviews

[Glenn McCrary�]

Thsi is a remarkably beautiful poem and you write so deep and so compellingly :)

[Santulan]

THis is an interesting read, you speak your heart out and that too with so little words and yet manage to get your point, your wish across to the reader. You don't divulge much and hence maintain an aura of suspense and curiosity.