I am in love with you

I am in love with you, I’m not sure why

But let me take the time to say with a *sigh*

You take my breath away, yes even at a distance

I believe I was created to join you in existence

Telling you my feelings in a poem is kind of lame

But God gave me a gift, if you want someone to blame

I think of you, morning and night and in between

I circle our names with a heart as if I were still a teen

Okay then, I’ll get straight to the point since you’re in a hurry

I’ll be yours until the end of time, so please, baby, don’t worry

 

Reviews

[Sandra K]

: D

Beautiful! What a great poem!!!
I am enjoying your writing!
Thanks for share such beautiful work!

Sandra K!

[thebrokenwillow]

love this.
it brought a smile to my face.
great job.

[Erotic Goddess]

But God gave me a gift, if you want someone to blame

I loved that line and I love the intensity in this piece. You pen a beautiful poem hon! I always love stopping by to read your latest posts. I like the image you create of being a love-sick teen again! It was memory-evoking.

Smiles,
Stephanie

[Me]

I like this very much...great job!

[Kitty]

aww. i love this.... i want my boyfriend to read this.

[John Stussy]

Excellently written poem. Short and to the point, but not too curt.

[Imperfection]

Very pretty.
Straight from the heart.

[ganymeder]

Very nicely done. :)

[Lia]

Sweet poem. Nicely penned. Thanks xx

[Otter]

Another good one, I like it.