When I peer into your eyes

When I peer into your eyes I see

What your heart beholds of me

Your thoughts when you stare

At me, I can’t even draw air

Just having you be so near

You make me forget all my fears

I feel safe with you, Silly, I know

My feelings are coming out in a flow

A stream of words from my lips

I really feel like I’m going to trip

This jumble of emotions is wild

Just thinking of you when you smile

So let me take this time to say

I fall in love with you every single day

 

Reviews

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

I really like this peice! It is loving, soft, and romantic. Keep writing. A voice like yours need to be heard! Peace to you and the world, Will's Gurl

[Antonio Valentino]

So loving, so sensual, so soft.
You are a true romantic me lady.
And a wonderful poet, as well.

Antone

[Ron Reardon]

Sounds like true love for sure. Hope you can keep that feeling forever! Nicely done!

[John Taylor]

I must be honest with you�my heart kind of melted. Any poem that does that to me is a good one. Great work.

Now if I can find a girl to write something like this specifically for *me*!

[darkwolfalphapuppy]

Awwwww. That was very sweet and touching. It was full of emotion and very well expressed. It sent a warm vibe through me. I liked it very much so. I am going to read more of ur work.

[Kelley Pascoe]

Sounds like true love. Great write Kat! Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[Brie]

I love this poem! I could really feel the emotion. Your rhyming sounded so natural! Great job!
-Brie