A Lifelong Battle

A Lifelong Battle

A Poem by Kat-Marie Berti

A lifelong battle, it has been

To win you over, bit by bit

Fight and fail in misery

Command and order constantly

How foolish we have been

Not to see the blazing truth

Our love shall always prevail

Through time and trickling sand

 

© 2008 Kat-Marie Berti


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so hopeful and full of faith! I love it...Devotion is the True sign of True Love. Understanding that wen two come together open to each other...all else pales in comparison and nothing can daunt them... Exquisite~!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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"Our love shall always prevail
Through time and trickling sand"

These two lines are really powerful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 19, 2008

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Kat-Marie Berti
Kat-Marie Berti

Saint-Bruno, Nostalgic, Canada



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Writing has been my escape since I was a child. My mind is busy working on my latest novel and I also try to find the time to write every single day. Some of my favourite authors: Stephen King, .. more..

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