Hopeless

circumstances, something that is really true, something that is sad...

Some undisplayable, there are few pains,,

all my efforts truly went in vain 

Some untold stories, there are which exist,,

feel that word "happiness" doesnot surface in my list

Victim say or looser, or whosoever m i ?

why misfortune follows me, just like a spy

Perhaps i was a bird, wanted to fly high,,

now think of eliminating whole world, or should i die

Neither fervour it is, nor any kind of curiosity,,

unlike mankind, centraling in ferocity

My childhood slipped from tilted broken slope,,

with every moment that goes,now i am loosing hope !!......

Reviews

[APOORVA]

loved it
loved it
loved it
and,,,,,loved it

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks a lot for the great encouragement..

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...the same is my condition. Loved this one. Beautifully written so true and relatable.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thnq.. infact sum f ur poems r so relatable... I guess sum f d events that had happened with us in our lives r same... like sum f ur awesome creation which u dedicated to ur father... it resembles alot... since childhood m not blessed with sum imminent resources in my life... my grandpa nd my father contributed a lot in bringing me up...

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh I can understand....When you write something which is close to your heart the words come from within.