Hug your mom

Hug your mom

A Poem by Abhishek Asthana
"

Sometimes all you need a tight hug from your mother and surely all your stress will melt away.

"

It's been aforecited earlier many times,

Mother is the perplexing discovery of the deity.

This is a kind of unwordly dilemma of emotions,

Which cannot be ameliorated through any treaty.

 

 

There is nothing beyond her grasp,

What does infant hurriedly require.

The way she converses with a kid,

It's a marvellous art which none of us acquire.

 

 

During childhood days mom acts like mentor,

Then afterwards she turns into counsellor.

Periodically she promotes herself into different characters,

Her own versatility is really as spectacular.

 

 

She enshrouds lapse made by the children,

And can willingly confront with any hindrance.

In sake of her kids, she resolves any conflict,

She overcomes any battle with her brilliance.

 

 

Though she knows, babies have grown up into adults,

Then too she wants to pamper and feed them by spoon,

Heartily she is an epitome of sacrifices,

For child having mother itself is a priceless boon.





© 2017 Abhishek Asthana


Author's Note

Abhishek Asthana
i just wanted to share this one on the occasion of mother's day but that day i was too busy in missing my mom... her love for me is like nothing else in the world... miss you a lot mom

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A great poem showing what a mother does for her children. How much ever we try to describe her love, dedication,care and sacrifice for us we won't be ale to coz it's beyond words. Those feelings we get from her, that security and all is just beyond the reach of words. If we are something today then its probably due to the values our mothers inculcated in us....Indeed ur mum will be glad to hear this

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

4 Years Ago

Exactly, so jis bacche ke liye kuch bacha na ho use sab bacha-kucha sa hi lagta ha puri duniya me..... read more
Aradhana

4 Years Ago

But since u have cm this far this is just due to her love and her care only which is in the form of .. read more
Abhishek Asthana

4 Years Ago

Undoubtedly



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This is the perfect one Abhishek Ji...I too wrote one one my mom.....on mother's day...please have a look....I m sure he will like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

thanks so much pragya ji... i am glad you liked it... definitely i will read that motherly write... .. read more
Yes hug your Mum she's the only one you got and brought you here and loved you to pieces like mums do!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

exactly,,, i do agree with you... thank you so much for reading and reviewing... :)
I agree. A mother's love is forever. I liked the control poem. When you honor your mother. You honor yourself. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

many thanks to you for your kind words,, m glad u liked it :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
The unique blend of words make this simply metered rhyme scheme a complex beat of emotion... While not all mothers are like the one described in this poem... Your mother seems a gem, and a brilliant support... You carefully and wonderfully portrayed that here, and I applaud that... Lovingly penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

yes, she was the best but unfortunately her presence with me did not last for so long... i really m.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

I am sorry, at least you immortalize her here... You are so very welcome...
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Wow this was beautifully written. I'm amazed at how you wrote this poem so eloquently. You did an amazing job at projecting a mother's love into words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words... I never want to leave any opportunity to show my gratitude towards mom.. read more
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L.C. Jarrette

7 Years Ago

i'm a fan...i'll be sure to follow you.
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Wow! Nothing to say just amazing. You incredibly tell ur feelings towards mother through this poem... Amazing work...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Miss sonowal... sorry i cannot address you by your first name because thats my mother.. read more
Mamta Sonowal

7 Years Ago

Ur most welc'me... Ooh nic ur mother's nme is also Mamta. That's nic. Anywayz I didn't mind u didn'.. read more
This is beautiful!
The mother is everything, she is the closest thing to us no matter what, and she is the only one that will love us the most.

Well wrote, really beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

excatly she is the only one,,, thanks a for reading joey, i am glad you liked it :)
Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Your welcome man, Im glad that I have read this. ^^
I miss my mom , i think this made you win. cheers to you writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

i just wish that she would have been enjoying my victory here... thank you so much for your kind vis.. read more
the best friend you`ll ever have

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

exactly, totally agreed... thank a lot for reading :)
They bring us into the world and we owe them our lives but then they love us and ask nothing in return.
Well penned A.A.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

true and any other affection is incapable of being matched by this unconditional love.. thanks you f.. read more

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Lucknow , The City of Nawabs, India



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