June at Grandpa's House

Open field of grass
Young siblings play in the summer.
Water gun and a bucket,
They splash and play.
Grandpa watches with his camera raised
Hours of fun at grandpa's house
He says "ready"
They know what that means
Time to pose for a picture.
I spun around to look at grandpa
Lost my balance,
Then my brother nudged me.
Tried to catch myself,
And plopped into the bucket.
With his hands on his hips,
And that smirk on his face.
I'd say my brother looked pretty proud.

Kasey Miriam 2015

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Relic]

One you'll always remember to I'll bet. Mischief and kids always go together don't they. :) Youth, Grandpa and memories are treasures never to be forgotten. I can see the sun shining and I can feel the warmth right on that field too.

Nice one Kasey.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you Relic. This is how I will remember my grandpa and I share the old days with him all the time so that he knows I will remember him as he was before his stroke.

[Relic]

I'm sorry to hear he had a stroke. I'm sure he's a good man. You'e welcome.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for stopping by and reading

[Jamie]

Really nice piece of work :) Great job!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for stopping to read

[Paper Forks]

Great narrative. I really liked the details you bothered to put in your poem. The poem flows nicely, but the rhythm could be done a tad bit better. Overall a great write, I look forward reading more from you.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you. I'll keep trying to fix the rhythm

[Marie]

THat sounds kind of neat. I'll bet you looked pretty good yourself.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for reading Marie. I surely looked like a happy seven year old

[Alfred Kukitz]

The old sibling rivalry. Sis & I did those things. Nice write!

Regards,
Al

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you Al. Glad you enjoyed the poem

[A. Amos]

Your writing is full of life and I always enjoy reading your work!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you Amos for stopping by its nice to hear from you again

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear...

[Sami Khalil]

So lovely and amazing those precious memories at grandpa's house. Picture perfect...:)......

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you Sami. Very nice of you to stop by

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Any time...:)....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and grandpa got that picture?
this poem is a pleasant snapshot...
nicely done.

[Kasey Miriam]

He got the picture and it's one of my favorites.

[Saddam]

That is funny and sweet dear...........
Time to pose.....

Time to pose for a picture.
I spun around to look at grandpa
Lost my balance,

[Kasey Miriam]

When I was young I spent more time with my grandparents than anyone my grandpa and I had many good times.