Give Me A Chance

I think it is kind of self explanatory.

Clear as night sky,

In my head how I feel,

These feelings for you,

I know they are real.

But when you do text,

It's hard to see what you mean,

You hold it all back,

Like an immature teen.

 

So I write you this poem,

Begging open up,

Let your inside come out,

Like my Nans dissected pup.

In this dark twisted world,

Love is surely the key,

Just say that you what me,

And that for sure you will see.

 

I would give you my heart,

What more can I say?

But rejecting me now,

Means I just walk away.

So as I stand before you,

In this vulnerable stance,

What do you say?

Will you give me a chance?

Author's Note

This is the first poem I have ever written so any help on how to improve would be much appreciated.

Reviews

[Alex W]

You're a f*****g good poet mate lol, well done :-D

Really liked it, flows well. High five for you, good sir.