blood staind love

blood staind love

A Poem by A.K.Bruhn
"

something i came up with idk why but i like it

"

 

i see her laying on the grass looking at me i run to her side

 her tears soak my shirt

i look down only to be met with a smile

i look into her pooring eyes and see

the happiness flow down her cheeks

"i'm so happy i met u"  she said

"i love you" i replied in a whimpery voice

 as she reaches for my hand i only cry harder

then as our hands come up bloddy she give's me her last kiss

as she pulls out the knife that stabbed her

as my tears hit her face in her wide open eyes

my blood staind hands close her lifeless green eyes

love is uncertain

so hold on to it if u have it

 

© 2008 A.K.Bruhn


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damn homie. why you bein so emo! your poems really touch me man. i FELT AS IF I WAS THERE.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on June 16, 2008

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A.K.Bruhn
A.K.Bruhn

Rio Rico, AZ



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Hello everybody my name is Tony i am 19 been writeing sence i was 13 still lovein it I love music all kinds from jazz to hiphop and a big sucker for love songs R&B and pretty much any other type .. more..

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