It thrills me

When you touch me, it thrills me
Your arms they fulfill me
And I know that it's silly
The danger, it chills me

The fact that it's risky and
Knowing you miss me,
That makes it seem worth it
It's fine that I can't see
That I may get in too deep..

But that suave in your kiss
Your caress is intense..

And I know who you are,
you were born with that star
That shines in the hearts
of the ones that you chose
Your hands can roam freely,
tie me down with your moves.

Author's Note

thoughts please :)

Reviews

[LoneWolf]

"The danger it chills me"

"you were born with that star
That shines in the hearts
of the ones that you chose"

I love the concept of a star shining in the heart and the way the cold concept touched my mind. You have interesting analogies.