Coeptus

Coeptus

A Poem by Abdul Batin Osman Bey
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redemption in a sort of way

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I am the weight of the world

Wrapped up in a meal replacement bar

Covered in filth

Naked

Smoking marijuana

Barrel boys loving in a cave

While a stud impregnates someone else’s wife

 

I am a walking talking Sodom

A naïve breeding Gemorah

Paying for my crimes every day

Eternity of payment

 

Cant say should have

No would have

Just too late

 

Not hard to live but I turned it down

Pain is my only comfort

 

Pain

Pain

Pain

© 2012 Abdul Batin Osman Bey


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This makes me feel grim, and dirty...which is WONDERFUL : D You have a real skill at making the reader feel the environment you place them in.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

thank you that means a lot to me
Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

thank u
Don't know who else would use 'meal replacement bar' in a poem

great stuff :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

lol always looking for new ways to express, if not me than who, thank you for your kind words
Good job, a very enjoyable read. It held my attention the whole time.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

nice, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Added on September 20, 2012
Last Updated on September 20, 2012
Tags: world, wrapped, replacement, naked, marijunana, barrel, boys, Sodom, Gemorah, pain

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Abdul Batin Osman Bey
Abdul Batin Osman Bey

Cambridge, MA



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